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we, the morning dew by *jonzoiplu:iconjonzoiplu:



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the earth is
an elegant oak

the world
a sliver

in our hands
an axe


we hack and
hack and

rub our sore
palms


the world is
a mangled oak

the earth
a sliver

of
beauty

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©2007-2009 *jonzoiplu
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:iconkatriesen:
i like it .

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new gallery: ~un-earthed
:iconkaleidoscopicmind:
I like the last bit, "a sliver of beauty", it's highly representative of the way I feel about the earth at the moment.
:iconcorpselover7:
Simple yet elegant. One could wear your poetry like a silk slip.

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A thought, even a possibility, can shatter and transform us. -Friedrich Nietzsche

-Moony
:iconstarsdie:
i think i've read it before <:
:iconjonzoiplu:
(^:3

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let's go play on a baggage carousel
:iconjonzoiplu:
if one wears silk slips.

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let's go play on a baggage carousel
:iconjonzoiplu:
i'm hoping it progresses (?) into the elegant oak it can be.

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let's go play on a baggage carousel
:iconlaretourdemoi:
i was able to picture all of that as a black+white film.

mad skillz, yo.

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[hiatus]

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