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About Me Deviant Member jonzoipluMale/Canada Group group avatar #TheCabalists
 
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  • Mood: Uneasy
  • Listening to: porcelain raft
  • Reading: gulag archipelago
  • Drinking: merlot
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how hard to make poetry make music
make love these days with bills at the door.
when warren buffet trumps old leonard,
the working class man is shucked like marrow

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i'm too comfortable for my own good finishing
the day with ice cream drowned in rum.
i stumble into california in a haze of ganja,
the mission district whore greets all with damnation

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saul perlmutter laughs and robert reich chuckles
but the doctor has no jokes for leptospirosis and the world's poor.
i touch annie clark and watch merrill scream,
the girl behind me faints, confesses her early crimes

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our bikes take us from the east to the west coast,
up the golden gate, and down the world's saddest flea market.
she counts tattoos and fixed gear bikes and simpers
at window reflections and sean connery in film

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if happiness is a san fran burrito served by the stranger
who calls me hermano, what is strawberry pie
and iced coffee with a girl you love?
jiro says nothing and a fish coughs to death

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we drink belgian wheat beer and talk about his startup,
sip sparkling shiraz with logistics of postgrad dating,
watch a banker wander into the jazz club,
the pink glow erases his earnings in hipster ale

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in the old chinese tales, corpses walk
and humanity is fixed in revolution, a nation propped
up like a cadaver marching to the arrhythmic heart of man.
ice cubes clink in my glass and the midwest disappears

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i do this all in memory, in a night of nostalgia,
remembering how all will be forgotten in time.
it's funny how time sneaks out and cheats on the mind
and tries to slip back into the sheets as if nothing happened

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did i dream in verse before, find lyrics in vomit and moans,
or is this a figment of guilt? these days when i want to write
i fall asleep or give up

what is the point, youth, but to cherish it






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~jonzoiplu
Jiminy Cricket
Canada
i'm a wallflower musician, neo-apothecary, & part-time flaneur.
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:iconcogongrass:
Many thanks for watching. (: It's much appreciated.

...Also, hell yes to your current journal post for (1) Lust, Caution, and (2) Neutral Milk Hotel. Mmmm.

...Also also, I've taken a little peek at your gallery here, and see some lovely pieces. I'll definitely be coming back here soon for further comment. (:

Cheers!
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`zebrazebrazebra Mar 28, 2011  Professional Writer
Qin'ai de or otherwise,

Any chance you'd consider writing for the #transliterations Musical Maps contest? 5 days left to enter, but I'd love to see you do it.

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<Vocable> Three. One to screw it in, one to watch and one to make dirty jokes.
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:iconfeliciac:
I've made a new account for various reasons and I subscirbed to you again, so you coud say I'm double watching you. :]
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I have just had the pleasure of feasting on your poetry... it's absolutely wonderful. I'm really speechless. I should probably comment on the individual poems, really, but I'm not sure I can choke the words out :D

I just wanted to tell you that everything about your poems is beautiful - the word choice, the imagery, the structure and rhythm and symbolism and meaning... I am absolutely insprited and awe-struck. Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful insights in poetic form!!! :heart:

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*georgie-ludovic Feb 7, 2011  Professional Writer
yo! thanks for the watch :)

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*neurotype Jan 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:wave: You've been featured! [link]

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Will you name one of my poems for me pleasE?

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:iconnonamepsalmist:
I haven't been around much. I plan to be around a lot more.

I just wanted you to know that I have missed you. You were always so kind to me.


I want to be a writer again.
Will you help me?


A.

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:iconlaretourdemoi:
so i found myself straying completely away from dA. but i keep your page bookmarked, just so i can come back and read your poetry updates. and i have all of your magnificent covers and original songs favorited on youtube.

pretty much, in the wee hours of the morning, i'm telling you that i see your wonderful talent and letting you know that it gets me through the hardest of days. keep up the good work. =]

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:icon1walkingblind:
You have great poetry! Very deep and gorgeously molded. Good job!

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